Will you let me?

I wrote this a couple weeks ago before school. I'm not sure if I like it, I know I've written better poetry (and I know it doesn't rhyme), but this is what I was feeling and this is what I ended up with.

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I've never cared so much,
I've never wanted to take all the pain.
It's raining in my world too,
But please don't drown and leave me here.
You want someone to care about you,
Can't you see how your pain is killing me?
Can you see how I love you?
You're my lifeline, but you can't seem to hold on to your own,
Can't I be your line too?
Can I pull you out? Will you let me?
You say you're crying on the bathroom floor,
Trying to get over it all,
Wishing someone would care,
Wondering who would cry at your funeral,
But I'm here on the floor now crying to God to let me take your pain
And show you how you matter.
How you're everything,
How you're amazing,
Please let me take you away
And show you what it's worth.
I don't know what it really is,
Why it's so great and critically acclaimed,
But I know it's nothing without you.
You taught me how to be, how to live freely.
You taught me it's okay to be this way.
You showed me someone understands;
Someone's here to wipe my wounds,
But you forgot it all the same.
Please just let me show you my love
Let me take your pain.
Do what you want to me,
Just don't leave me here,
Or else I'm afraid I'll drown in your flood of tears.
Can't you see how I care?
Please just let me help open your eyes and wipe away your tears.
I just've never felt this way and don't know what to say.
Let me help you make it go away.