life and death
I want to die,
To get to a world that never wakes up,
To not feel the pain of a loss.
I want to live, as if the life will never end,
Swim in sweet happiness.
I want to feel a sweet kiss from the lover -
The lover that never comes.
I can dream, I can imagine,
I can try to feel the warmth,
But it doesn't happen,
And after a long time waiting,
I give up on my life.
To get to a world that never wakes up,
To not feel the pain of a loss.
I want to live, as if the life will never end,
Swim in sweet happiness.
I want to feel a sweet kiss from the lover -
The lover that never comes.
I can dream, I can imagine,
I can try to feel the warmth,
But it doesn't happen,
And after a long time waiting,
I give up on my life.
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I'm not sure of the type.. it's pretty much a blank verse.. but elegy as well.. haha XDamm.. I wrote it at the 12\08\2010, day after my 14th birthday..
it started when I wrote the first two sentences to a fiend in a chat for no reason.. XD (actually, I edited it a bit.. it was like that: I wanna die, to get to a world where you never wake up)
Oh! and the last verse.. well, I wrote it WAY later than I wrote the two first verses.. so it's kinda wrong maybe.. but I felt that if I won't add it, the poem will stay unended...
umm.. well, I wish you to like it.. and I wanna know what do you think about it.. as it's my first ^^
Anne ^^
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Hey! well um.. It's been 3 years since I wrote this.. wow.. and I only now noticed I had a comment. So thank you for pointing out my mistakes, I probably didn't notice them while writing, however I fixed it now.
It seems to me the poem isn't bad, and I'm glad because I usually dislike my writing haha..
Uhm.. So.. Enjoy? I guess lol