The storm and them

He stands...
waiting,
waiting for someone to show
Only he doesn't know...
Doesn't know who is to come.
If they come at all
No one knows

So the thunder rolls
the lightning crashes
the first drops of rain
softly hit the ground.
The storm rolls in.

Waiting,
waitinng is all he does
till she shows up
to save his life

Her raven black hair
lighting just as the lightning does
her heartbeat like the thunder
her lips as soft as the first drops of rain.

She saves his life
like the storm does the world.
♠ ♠ ♠
Please comment i would like to know if this is good considering I came up with it during a storm last night. Thank you.