Diamonds

Whats pure in the
darkest of places
Its Inocents shines with the sun of golden
Rays
its rough edges and scratches
Showing its past mistakes
All those scratches and rough edges
Only makes it shine ever brighter
Ever more beautful
And ever more wise
Its elegance shining ever brighter with each
passing day
A pure ladies jewel
Such beautiful jem are the ladies
Using words in the apperiate manner
The elegant way they walk
Their beauty brighter than the suns golden rays
They are our worlds
Purest most gorgeous jems
♠ ♠ ♠
Second draft feeels like its missing something but cant put my fingure on it. Can some one help me please.comment pwease. Tankes to those who do