All as me

complexity sets in
tainting my heart
breaking my dreams

confusion clouds around
my mind, now blank
wipping clean a filled slate

feelings coarsing through
my veins burn away
the happieness of yesterday

ice now incloses
my burning passion
locked away, people passing

looks cast my way
show that they dont care
with one like me, who'd dare

complex as a woman
confused as a child
feeling as a mouse
ice as a glacier
looks as a murderer
all as me
♠ ♠ ♠
i dont know if the last part fits with the rest of the poem or if i should have separated them. either way...its here and itll be here untill furter notice :)
tell me what you think