Saeed

A stranger, wandering alone
In the wilderness,
Nothing to hope for,
Nothing to live for.

I'm sorry
I could have helped
Why has it gotten this bad?
You'll be missed,

By many;
Family, friends, colleagues.
But no one could stop you
You just kept falling.

Down, down, down
Into a pit of depression
And despair.
Stay strong, Saeed.
♠ ♠ ♠
Please can you tell me what you think. I need to show this to Saeed if it's good, he's suicidal and I'd love to know your opinion :)