In Progress Duo Line By Line

For this poem im working on next i will be doing a duo line by line
which is where i write one line then you comment what you want the next line to be
For instence ill start by saying
-Clenched in his fists, A Galaxy
(then you coment the next line)
A galaxy he once ruled,
(and repeat)
the poem doesnt have to have the same meanin just a
good flow
i want this poem to be about 30 lines long
and each person can only coment once
for the poem to go on you coment the next line according to the coment before yours

i'll start and i'll make a new page when its all done with a title including everyones names that commented

i'll start of course so lets get moving

First Line

-Where he hangs His Head in shame-