Reveal

[first verse]
Say yo prayers(yo prayers) the world is dying here! Now it's coming to an end.
See now the death of old(death of old) and the beginning of destruction!
Lies! Have led to war that's spread it's curse.
Lust and hate haven't even begun their worst.
Today we will rise up! The unheard will speak,
Their thoughts will be heard of! Silent ones will shriek.

[chorus]
From the dark we will crawl, pale skin and eyes
Stare at the sky and you with despise.
There's no love loss between you and me.
Your lies, your hypocrisy they shall see.

[second verse]
Now I join this masquerade,
But unlike you I won't let myself fade
To the black of night from the light of day.
I won't hide, I won't flee
You will see
I won't run away.
Your deceit will be shown
To all who oppose
The truth will be known
We won't lose
To the likes
Of
You...

[chorus]
From the dark we will crawl, pale skin and eyes
Stare at the sky and you with despise.
We're about to let them all see
The damage done by your lies and hypocrisy.
From here you can hear their screams of rage
As they rattle the bars on the monster's cage.
You're trapped with nowhere to go, nowhere to run and hide
Their fire's already found it's way inside.

[final verse]
You said we would have peace, you gave us destruction
And now your time is at it's end.
I told you we would win
When you buried yourself so deep in lies.
See now all the demonic eyes
As they sit and watch you die.
With a final shriek your fate is sealed.
All your deception...has been revealed.
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I don't know. I've never really written a song before and most of my friends try saying writing poetry is just like writing a song, but it isn't. This actually took me a lot longer than most of my poems and I'm not entirely sure how I like it. Hoping for a lot of feedback because I'm curious as to how others think I did.