Drip, Drip, Drip

Drip, drip, drip
I can finally feel the pain,
I can finally feel something,
at the flash of red.

As I feel it's warmth,
my head spins,
my body goes numb.

When I feel the strengh,
of my body leaving,
as I hit the floor,
as I hear
Drip, drip, drip........
♠ ♠ ♠
I think this is kinda good.......maybe I'm wrong? Tell me what you think!:)