Oh My God.

I just can't believe it
I'm only sixteen
It wasn't even three years ago
And they're rhyming just like me

I'm reading over their sob stories
Their disgusting pieces of shit
And I see the potential in their words
And praying to god they reach for it

Because I never did
And I'm only sixteen
But I don't expect to live past high school
Let along be a beautiful head fuck thing

So yeah, your writing is awful
It makes me want to gag
But please keep going on with it

Because this will probably be the last thing
That I bother writing about ever again.....