Reaching

I’m trapped in a crystal mine
Everything is just so fine
But it’s yet to be discovered
I tell myself it will get better
But my words are only balloons

Gonna keep reaching
No, I’m never gonna let go
Gonna keep climbing,
I’ll never stop unwinding
I’ll reach the peak eventually

Everytime I hear
Beauty’s in the eye of the beholder
I just keep getting colder
So I try to just act bolder
But it’s just so hard

Gonna keep reaching
No, I’m never gonna let go
Gonna keep climbing,
I’ll never start unwinding
I’ll reach the peak eventually

When the end is near, No I won’t fear,
Because I’ll reach the peak eventually
♠ ♠ ♠
So I'm debating whether I should send this to my favorite singer (Lindsey Pavao) to ask what she thinks about it or not. I want to know whether it's good enough to show her. Can you tell me if it's good enough to or not? Don't be mean, but please be honest about it, because if everyone says yes and it's not that good, I would have embarrassed myself in front of Lindsey Pavao, which would be the death of me. Input? :)