Unfathomable Pain II.

Can you hear them eternally shouting?
The screams of the crashing rains?
Can you feel them saddened and pouting?
The dreadful weepings in vain?

What's that dreading sound?
And to where does it wreak?
Is this my voice, is it me that speaks?
Lamentation's calling...repeating someone's name.
Whispering, whispering...unfathomable pain.

Invisible needle piercing my most tender sides...
Blinding the tears that seep from these eyes.
My tongue is thick with the black sting of Death,
And nothing but still screams capture my breath.

My heart decomposes, bleeding halves of a whole,
Like a dull ghost, slowly ripping this soul...
Arms, legs, flailing madly away,
As if pulled from their sockets, but somehow kept at bay.

Rain falls in spikes that break my mind unto the air
Unfathomable pain...unfathomable pain...
There's nothing here, there's nothing there!
Unfathomable...unfathomable pain...
I'm not insane, I'm not insane...

Don't you hear them eternally shouting?
The screams of the crashing rains?
Can't you feel them saddened and pouting?
The dreadful weepings in vain?
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How can I stop, when it's the only thing I know how to do...Writing poetry, I mean.

Besides guitar, and singing of course :)
...Comments?