Ready Set Let's Go

This goes to show
Every minute it takes; sixty seconds to waste
And I, would , like
To let you know that

Life's like a speeding bullet
Racing down the lane
That clock just keeps on spinning
Time is ticking
Ready, set , let's go

Don't you ever forget it
When you're falling down a pit
There's no point to resist
Sorry but i hate to say
Life's a game that we all must

And I, would , like
To let you know that

Life's like a speeding
racing down the lane
You can never beat the race even though it's
Right there
In front of your face
Can't stop the clock from spinning
Time is ticking
Ready, set, lets go
♠ ♠ ♠
First poem, give me your hardest reviews so I can improve