Song kept hidden but the night carries on

••Still a morning is left to come;
The sky and sun as one,
This intensity can not be reality,
But a heart can't be kept for too long

••Stars learning how to shine;
With mystery hidden in the sky,
A moon that can't be far,
Will be as beautiful as its night.

••A song carries on her melody;
Secrets within a cloud of serenity,
Music has been played so carefully,
But lyric must be sung with bravery.
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This was made for some one as a gift the only major reason i posted it up because i really want critiszm to make it much more better and I want it to be really good