Heartstrings' Melody

Like the snow globe,
in this empty room,
shattered and in pieces,
broken crystal and bleeding essence,
with all the pretty stripped away,
and that which lies inside clear;
naked and bare, beautiful but not pretty,
and turn the spring and hear,
what sweet music plays,
a melody like a breath of life,
for an aching soul.
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Any type of criticism is appreciated.