by the likes of 2.. true version

continuation..

the real poem starts here...
the 1rst part was the background//..

thy thoughts are cherished..
but forgotten in peril...

thy ship of lust..
is on the cruise of must..

thy good is unknown..
for thy trait is for all..

pathetic they say..
criticized in their brains...

my mind is getting better..
still i have to learn better..

thy senses are weakening ..
for thy belief is threatening..

thy ocean of blues..
drowning in the mist of tools..

my skies are comforting..
while the roads are blocking..

my eyes are burning..
while my head is turning..

churning life is..
tiring dining is//..

true or nay..
this life is full of dares..

thy cars are fools..
for walking is good for you..

why am i saying this..
is it part of the poem..?

one things for sure..

...this poem is being read..

...by the likes of you..

:D