The Hush Sound - Like Vines - Comments

aha i love the hush sound. it's an amazing album.
review was okay, but to me, it just seemd too...i dunno, methodical, somehow. like you dissected it all apart and something just left. you might also want to put in some background info on the band and talk about all the members, and just thier style in general to pad it out.

This was an okay review, but it just bugged me how you would word it and write that one song was Bob's and the other was Greta's. You make it seem as if they're the only ones in the band, at least who matter. That's obviously not true. Anyway, I agree with the other person. Perhaps better transitions would spice things up a bit. Overall, not too bad. I do enjoy The Hush Sound. I'd love to get their CD.

to make this review better, first of all you should start the review with imformation about the hush sound, and the album, whether this is there 1st, 2cd, for example, etc. also use better transitioning phrases then "then we have" or "next we have." read more reviews to work out how to write so the reader doesn't get bored. sorry thats just constructive critism for you.