The Church Street Harlot - Comments

  • DontChaseMeAround

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    I can't believe that this was the 1st story EVER on Mibba! Fantastic! :)
    August 1st, 2019 at 08:41pm
  • Unown

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    So good! Loved the tension and description, and I was impressed with the ending. A really neat take on Jack the Ripper.
    June 21st, 2019 at 04:46am
  • The Warden's Wife

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    Absolutely amazing! One of the very best stories I have ever read on this site!
    There were a few typos, but I am much too lazy of a person to go back and tell you exactly where each one was, either way, it was no bother at all...

    The grammar, spelling, descriptions, detail and everything is perfect! I swear, this is one that could be published as a short story. I looove the original idea of how the story of Jack the Ripper went, I have never seen a version like this. And I just love how you described the man, and the way she regretted her life and her eyes stung a little when she first saw him; amazing.

    The descriptions were literally breath-taking, I could almost be in this story, and that is an amazing thing in itself because I can hardly see my imagination at all, but the imagery in this was just-I really don't know how you could do better than that!

    You have amazing talent.
    July 30th, 2010 at 06:13am
  • epigaea

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    This story is a wonderful account of the horrors that happened so long ago. Highly original and thought provoking. A great read, even if it's short!
    January 24th, 2010 at 11:53pm
  • Matt Smith

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    It is, actually. I only realised that a few weeks ago myself.
    Thank you (:
    October 6th, 2009 at 04:58pm
  • Shane!

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    Is this the first story on Mibba?
    It's very good anyway.
    October 6th, 2009 at 06:24am
  • Perpetual_Writer

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    This story's just like the one I read in a book called 'The Casses that Haunt us.' I Love this story more though....
    September 11th, 2009 at 10:34pm
  • Matt Smith

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    Well, for better or for worse, I've finally finished this story.
    I just had a burst of creativity and decided to take advantage of it. So, after almost three years, The Church Street Harlot is finished.

    Thank you to everybody who has commented. I don't often get comments on Mibba, so I have appreciated these very much. (:
    May 25th, 2009 at 05:47pm
  • Saviour .

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    This is so well-written, it's crazy!
    I absolutely love this, and you have to finish it! Seriously. You have to.
    I might die if you don't.

    Love this <3
    May 24th, 2009 at 11:25pm
  • Mat Devine

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    Wow...all I can say is wow...this story is so well written it's amazing :) can't wait for more!
    May 24th, 2009 at 09:35pm
  • Matt Smith

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    I'd just like to apologise to everyone who's ever commented this :shifty
    This story has been here longer than most people have been on Mibba and I still haven't finished it. It's a monument to how much of an epic fail I am at finishing things. But I have an ending planned, I just need to write it. It will be done.
    May 24th, 2009 at 08:55pm
  • jackxsally

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    What the hell! You stopped writing this! Can't you please, please, please write more! It sounds like it was going to be really awesome!
    May 14th, 2009 at 02:47am
  • ruthann

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    CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!:O
    April 11th, 2009 at 01:37pm
  • venetian

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    I really loved it! Its not often you come across a victorian era story on mibba.
    August 24th, 2008 at 03:31pm
  • alex.in.wonderland

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    Wow. This story is really amazing. I like it a lot.
    August 15th, 2008 at 12:07am
  • blueraincoat.

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    Omg Meg, this is amazing. Through your writting I can actually feel the 1888s London. Do post more.
    July 18th, 2007 at 09:08pm
  • catie_chaos

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    wow. you are a really good writer. you use a lot of imagery too. i can almost picture mary in my mind. its good. update soon please
    June 30th, 2007 at 12:38am
  • Cello.

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    I loved this. It's so elegantly written. I would really like to see more!
    June 27th, 2007 at 04:08pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    This is very well written, with good language use and techniques. As someone else said, this is one of the better stories written on here. One or two grammar mistakes, but that's much better than most! This is truly an amazing story. Obviously written by someone who reads and is very mature for her age.
    It's also very unusual, in its setting and genre. There aren't many of them about like this. Which is great, because it's a breath of fresh air.
    Keep this coming because it's great.
    June 20th, 2007 at 05:13pm
  • Apocalyptic faith

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    ^_^ I started to read it and realised I already have ^_^
    June 20th, 2007 at 05:04pm