The Church Street Harlot - Comments

  • xsmaks

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    August 3rd, 2021 at 01:58am
  • pratanubanerjee

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    Very good style of writing. .. all the best.,. carry on sharing
    July 4th, 2021 at 01:06pm
  • jewellboney

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    Your writing style is the best. This story is unique and I am so hooked on the characters. It is amazing if you will continue to write because you are so talented. I would like to Inform you that NoveIStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html
    April 13th, 2021 at 05:49am
  • zyla

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    Great tips
    January 20th, 2020 at 10:25pm
  • anthonyconstantinou

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    This is the best site
    August 29th, 2019 at 08:10am
  • DontChaseMeAround

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    I can't believe that this was the 1st story EVER on Mibba! Fantastic! :)
    August 1st, 2019 at 08:41pm
  • Unown

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    So good! Loved the tension and description, and I was impressed with the ending. A really neat take on Jack the Ripper.
    June 21st, 2019 at 04:46am
  • The Warden's Wife

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    Absolutely amazing! One of the very best stories I have ever read on this site!
    There were a few typos, but I am much too lazy of a person to go back and tell you exactly where each one was, either way, it was no bother at all...

    The grammar, spelling, descriptions, detail and everything is perfect! I swear, this is one that could be published as a short story. I looove the original idea of how the story of Jack the Ripper went, I have never seen a version like this. And I just love how you described the man, and the way she regretted her life and her eyes stung a little when she first saw him; amazing.

    The descriptions were literally breath-taking, I could almost be in this story, and that is an amazing thing in itself because I can hardly see my imagination at all, but the imagery in this was just-I really don't know how you could do better than that!

    You have amazing talent.
    July 30th, 2010 at 06:13am
  • epigaea

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    This story is a wonderful account of the horrors that happened so long ago. Highly original and thought provoking. A great read, even if it's short!
    January 24th, 2010 at 11:53pm
  • Matt Smith

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    It is, actually. I only realised that a few weeks ago myself.
    Thank you (:
    October 6th, 2009 at 04:58pm
  • Shane!

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    Is this the first story on Mibba?
    It's very good anyway.
    October 6th, 2009 at 06:24am
  • Perpetual_Writer

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    This story's just like the one I read in a book called 'The Casses that Haunt us.' I Love this story more though....
    September 11th, 2009 at 10:34pm
  • Matt Smith

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    Well, for better or for worse, I've finally finished this story.
    I just had a burst of creativity and decided to take advantage of it. So, after almost three years, The Church Street Harlot is finished.

    Thank you to everybody who has commented. I don't often get comments on Mibba, so I have appreciated these very much. (:
    May 25th, 2009 at 05:47pm
  • Saviour .

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    This is so well-written, it's crazy!
    I absolutely love this, and you have to finish it! Seriously. You have to.
    I might die if you don't.

    Love this <3
    May 24th, 2009 at 11:25pm
  • Mat Devine

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    Wow...all I can say is wow...this story is so well written it's amazing :) can't wait for more!
    May 24th, 2009 at 09:35pm
  • Matt Smith

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    I'd just like to apologise to everyone who's ever commented this :shifty
    This story has been here longer than most people have been on Mibba and I still haven't finished it. It's a monument to how much of an epic fail I am at finishing things. But I have an ending planned, I just need to write it. It will be done.
    May 24th, 2009 at 08:55pm
  • jackxsally

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    What the hell! You stopped writing this! Can't you please, please, please write more! It sounds like it was going to be really awesome!
    May 14th, 2009 at 02:47am
  • ruthann

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    CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!:O
    April 11th, 2009 at 01:37pm
  • venetian

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    I really loved it! Its not often you come across a victorian era story on mibba.
    August 24th, 2008 at 03:31pm
  • alex.in.wonderland

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    Wow. This story is really amazing. I like it a lot.
    August 15th, 2008 at 12:07am