The Church Street Harlot - Comments

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Very good style of writing. .. all the best.,. carry on sharing

Your writing style is the best. This story is unique and I am so hooked on the characters. It is amazing if you will continue to write because you are so talented. I would like to Inform you that NoveIStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html

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I can't believe that this was the 1st story EVER on Mibba! Fantastic! :)

So good! Loved the tension and description, and I was impressed with the ending. A really neat take on Jack the Ripper.

Absolutely amazing! One of the very best stories I have ever read on this site!
There were a few typos, but I am much too lazy of a person to go back and tell you exactly where each one was, either way, it was no bother at all...

The grammar, spelling, descriptions, detail and everything is perfect! I swear, this is one that could be published as a short story. I looove the original idea of how the story of Jack the Ripper went, I have never seen a version like this. And I just love how you described the man, and the way she regretted her life and her eyes stung a little when she first saw him; amazing.

The descriptions were literally breath-taking, I could almost be in this story, and that is an amazing thing in itself because I can hardly see my imagination at all, but the imagery in this was just-I really don't know how you could do better than that!

You have amazing talent.

This story is a wonderful account of the horrors that happened so long ago. Highly original and thought provoking. A great read, even if it's short!

It is, actually. I only realised that a few weeks ago myself.
Thank you (:

Is this the first story on Mibba?
It's very good anyway.

This story's just like the one I read in a book called 'The Casses that Haunt us.' I Love this story more though....

Well, for better or for worse, I've finally finished this story.
I just had a burst of creativity and decided to take advantage of it. So, after almost three years, The Church Street Harlot is finished.

Thank you to everybody who has commented. I don't often get comments on Mibba, so I have appreciated these very much. (:

This is so well-written, it's crazy!
I absolutely love this, and you have to finish it! Seriously. You have to.
I might die if you don't.

Love this <3

Wow...all I can say is wow...this story is so well written it's amazing :) can't wait for more!

I'd just like to apologise to everyone who's ever commented this :shifty
This story has been here longer than most people have been on Mibba and I still haven't finished it. It's a monument to how much of an epic fail I am at finishing things. But I have an ending planned, I just need to write it. It will be done.

What the hell! You stopped writing this! Can't you please, please, please write more! It sounds like it was going to be really awesome!

CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!:O

I really loved it! Its not often you come across a victorian era story on mibba.

Wow. This story is really amazing. I like it a lot.