The Church Street Harlot - Comments

Omg Meg, this is amazing. Through your writting I can actually feel the 1888s London. Do post more.

wow. you are a really good writer. you use a lot of imagery too. i can almost picture mary in my mind. its good. update soon please

I loved this. It's so elegantly written. I would really like to see more!

This is very well written, with good language use and techniques. As someone else said, this is one of the better stories written on here. One or two grammar mistakes, but that's much better than most! This is truly an amazing story. Obviously written by someone who reads and is very mature for her age.
It's also very unusual, in its setting and genre. There aren't many of them about like this. Which is great, because it's a breath of fresh air.
Keep this coming because it's great.

^_^ I started to read it and realised I already have ^_^

omg!!!!!!!! that is all I can say. It is unbelievably good. You are so good at describing. Wow the best stories I have read in a while. You are so talented, keep writing.

i truly love this.
the story has roots in history that intrigues me. i think you should still continue this story. it's something about it that makes it seem so magical in this dirty sort of way.

i'll subscribe to it and i think you should update.

I like it! Keep going with it!

I loved it, your choice of words is great. :]

your writing has real class and style, i hope you continue this because i absolutely loved it, your description is captivating and your plotline is (so far) impeccable. more!!!

I love your writing style, I'm always trying to write like that!! (I still need way more practise though)
But I like how you've set it in the past, and I like the storyline too...
It's quite mysterious....I love it! =)

I'm impressed by your command of the language. There are a few grammatical issues here and there, but nothing major. I'd like to read more before I pass too much judgment, for some reason I wasn't able to get enough of a feel for your writing just based on this. I will ask, though, that you be careful of writing in a setting nearly 150 years before your time; it can work against you.

I like this story! Update soon please!

Wow- this is really quite interresting. I like your style- it's almost mysterious- but descriptive. The storyline looks like it's going somewhere- I like it. You should write more- soon. I'd be glad to be able to look forward to reading more.

I really love this story, keep writin, hope that you update soon!

This story is really well written.
seems like its going to get very Jack-The-Ripper-Esque
tell me when theres more

Wow, that's unique like nothing I've ever seen before.

This is really good! Not to repeat what everyone else said, but it is written differently. Very individual! *claps*

A Melancholy Autumn:

Oh! I just read this and I really think you should continue! The idea is so original compared to some stories here. You have an amazing way with words and you're very articulate. And your writing shows that you're very mature for your age.

Leep writing. (:

LEEP.

:shifty: sorry [/spam]

Oh! I just read this and I really think you should continue! The idea is so original compared to some stories here. You have an amazing way with words and you're very articulate. And your writing shows that you're very mature for your age.

Leep writing. (: