January 7th, 2007 at 04:58pm
This update was amazing. The way you described your characters through their actions and speech was really good. I still think this is one of the best stories on here. No grammar mistakes, you put such care into picking all the right words... That's rare on here - sad but true.
I hope you'll get around to update soon.
(I hope everybody noticied I changed the main Characters name, I hope I didn't confuse people xD)