The Church Street Harlot - Comments

  • Matt Smith

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    You're too kind :D

    (I hope everybody noticied I changed the main Characters name, I hope I didn't confuse people xD)
    January 7th, 2007 at 04:58pm
  • Bastard Son.

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    This update was amazing. The way you described your characters through their actions and speech was really good. I still think this is one of the best stories on here. No grammar mistakes, you put such care into picking all the right words... That's rare on here - sad but true.

    I hope you'll get around to update soon.
    January 7th, 2007 at 11:45am
  • wx12

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    You most definitely should expand on this idea. You are so descriptive and the way you compose words is amazing. If you keep writting, I will of course keep reading, the subject is very interesting and attention-getting.
    January 1st, 2007 at 06:20pm
  • helen

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    I noticed Sara commented on this story, so I thought this must be very good, and it is. It really is different and I love it for that. I hope you'll keep posting :}
    December 23rd, 2006 at 11:53pm
  • Bastard Son.

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    And I seriously want you to post more. I like stories like this one, it's different and intriguing, and most important of all it has that dingy, dirty atmosphere I love. xD

    And you're welcome. =)
    December 23rd, 2006 at 11:47pm
  • Matt Smith

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    I like it so far, Meg. Your story holds a note of mystery in it and the way it's written is fascinating. I really hope you'll post a new chapter soon, because I've enjoyed in this one.
    Ok, so I saw this topic, and I was like "O_o somebody read that?"
    I really appreciate the fact that you took time out to read it!
    I originally started this as a one-chapter thing.
    But I'm seriously considering writing more.

    Thanks again. (:
    December 23rd, 2006 at 11:44pm
  • Bastard Son.

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    I like it so far, Meg. Your story holds a note of mystery in it and the way it's written is fascinating. I really hope you'll post a new chapter soon, because I've enjoyed in this one.
    December 23rd, 2006 at 11:41pm