Scandalous...That is my new favorite word right now. -adore it.
This is a very dirty fanfiction, I love it. I also like the fact that they didn't vonfess love or anything, that would have beena a bit cliche, especially in that situation.
And that's why this is great.
But you also had a few mistakes in there, so, if you could, re-read it and correct those bitchy grammar errors.