Changing The Rules - Comments

I cried so hard at the end of this story. I'm still crying. This is an amazing story and you're and amazing writer.

You totally have to put Nick's tat in Moving On Up... OOH! You definitely have to!

I'm reading this story again... Just for the hell of it.. I forgot how much I loved it, and why, until now... :}

I spent quite a long time trying to catch up on this, well, I skimmed through the last ten chapters, I'm sorry, but I just really wanted to read the sequel already. I love Nick and Charlene are so adorable. I was so sad when I read they broke up, but then I immediately lit up when they got back together.

So since I'm a bum and skimmed the last ten chapters, probably the most important ones in this whole story, Nick and Charlene got back together, they spend some holiday together with Charlene's grandparents, they made love, people finally found out about them, and then the last chapter they graduated? Or something... and Charlene got accepted into Oxford University?

This story is lovely and was very well written. I can't wait to read the sequel and I hopefully won't get lost(:

i subscribed to the a sequel but i am wanting nick to come in and please do not have them both with other people

I just finished reading this in a whole day! It's amazing, I couldn't stop reading it. I can't wait for the sequel :DDD

I remembered:D

I think that he should follow his dream to become a singer with his brothers...to be something like the story in "SK8ER BOY" by Avril Lavigne but with a happy end

Well, I think that you should do a sequel like about 3 or 4 years later, when Nick goes for the first time at Yale, to se Charlene, but he discovers she isn`t there. He tries to find out the place where she had gone from her parents, but they won`t buldge. Also, he tries with Sara who tells him she isn`t in USA anymore. He then tries to google it, and lots of more stuff(idk:D).
Finally, she finds her and also finds out that she is searching for an apartament to move with her best friend. But fate brings them in the same apartament, and memories return...

i think I had another idea, but here it`s like 1 am and i`m sleepy..
I`ll write soon, if I remember:D

but, nonetheless great story, you would make a great writer
maybe someday we`ll buy your books:d

Riiight. I think that this should happen. :-

After a couple of months Nick realises that he cannot possibly live without Charlene and goes to Yale to finally try and win her back. When he is told that she doesnt school there his life tumbles around him. The only way he can seem to block out the pain is to return to his old life as a man whore. However, with turning down the offer of a scholarship and being the old jerk he is, his parents and brothers disown him. They tried to put up with him at first because they knew Charlene was the problem but it all just got too much. So he decides to start his new life, in London with a whole set of new girls to work himself through.
However, at the same time Charlene is doing fantastically in school and has even gotten herself a new boyfriend, although she doesnt quite love him yet. But when she finds out he has cheated on her several times, she isnt as bothered as she thought she would be but she still is quite upset. She goes off to a night club to drown her sorrows. However at the same night club, Nick himself is there figuring out which girl he is going to take home that night. As he gets so drunk that he doesnt even know what he is doing (along with Charlene being in the same state) he sees her but doesnt quite believe it is her (and vice versa) they have a whole night of fun ahead of them.
BUTTTTTTT .... when they wake up the next morning, in the same bed, Naked, with the long forgotten ring on Charlenes finger, they have a lot to figure out. As they try to sort out how to get out of the marriage, and back to their lives they have lived for the past 3 years, Nicks jerkiness gets the better of him and its up to Charlene to change him back to the love of her life which has been hidden deep within him because of all the hurt he had been through.
SOOOOOO in conclusion, most of it will be about how they have to try and figure out their marriage whilst trying to fight their evident love for eachother.

Ok sorry i got a bit carried away.,

MAAAANN! I just read through it and i have decided I dont like it anymore :P

BUT i still think you should have it as though nick has changed back to his old ways to avoid being hurt again. :)

SOOO EXCITED FOR THE SEQUEL. PLEASE WRITE IT SOOON :D

sequel idea :

I THINK THEY SHOULD MEET LIKE A FEW YEARS LATER, AND EVENTUALLY GET BACK TOGETHER, AND THEY JUST PROBABLY GOT THEIR HEARTS BROKEN BEFORE THEY MEET.. AND WHEN THEY MEET AGAIN THEY SEEK EACH OTHER FOR LOVE AND COMFORT..

ps. just an idea :)

HOPE U POST THE SEQUEL SOON. :D

I REALLY AM EXCITED :)

whoo-who, sequel! x)

OK so i just have a small idea i dont know about it but im just ganna type it
What if the sequal takes place years later, She's moved on her heart is still NIcks but shes trying to change that, well Nick cant get her out of his mind he even travels to yale one day.

But then one day Charlene has her current guy cheat on her the day before summer break that she was supposed to spend with him. So her only plan is to go back to the US; she calls up Sara and spends time with her and Henry. But then Nick stops by about to give up the look for Charlene but he finds her there.

WOO HOO! SEQUAL! [:

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'm actually doing a victory dance in my chair right now. ;)
haha, i'm soooooooooooo super duper happy theres a seqel. :D
can't wait to read the first chapter if it.

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I've been thinking about it and I'm pretty sure that for some reason, even though Jay might genuinely love Charlene, he's abusive in some way. I just... I got that thought and it won't leave. So, I wanted to let you know.
But what I REALLY want, is for you to show that on the surface Nick is doing really good. That he's in a university or maybe even an up-and-coming musician, but to show that on the surface, he's perfect. And that he isn't destroying himself by one night stands and ruining his life. That he has some what moved on or is trying.
And that Jay and Charlene are in a long distance relationship, which is on the rocks due to Charlene's success in what ever and Jay's failure in life.
Are you doing fast-forward so that the universities have just ended or are you writing about the universities too?
So, let us all know when the sequel is out and you can ask me some ideas, cause let's face it, I can figure out some ideas which will give you a starting point to your ideas. I think so ;)

aww the ending made me sad:(
but YAY sequel!!! :D
i hope its happy charlene and nick deff belong together!!

they should definately meet up later in life, like once they're a few years older and are done with college. i don't really know what state they should be in but take your time with deciding(just not to long :) ) i know that this sequel will be awesome!!!!!!!!

Maybe you should end it with charlene leaving for london and she should write a letter to nick saying that she will always love him and explaining why she's not in harvard and that she may not come back.
Then the big ending should be him not giving up and him wanting to search for her.

Oh and with the letter,she obviously wouldnt put her address on it,just Nick's.

And the new story title should be:Search for Meaning.

sequell :D