The prophets eye - Comments

I realy enjoyed your story and am sort of disapointed that you havn't updated it yet. Yes I think that you need to copy your story into microsoft office word to spell check and grammer check it. :) but realy you have a great story going for you! Your a pretty talented writer you should keep it up!

Your story seems interesting, but the run-on sentences make it tedious to read. You should look into having it edited.

Congratulations on posting your first story, however. It takes a lot of guts to put yourself on the web, for anyone to criticize. I look forward to what comes next.

*~*Audra