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  • efflorescxnt

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    awww! i love how it ended! one of my favorite stories! =]
    July 15th, 2009 at 12:27am
  • screamedlullaby

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    dude, you stole the chirp thing from such a pretty girl by laura weiss.
    not cool.
    June 19th, 2009 at 11:25pm
  • KaTaStRoPhEx10

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    audrey you're going to kill me
    im only on chapter 19 xD
    May 31st, 2009 at 06:33pm
  • PrincessShortie75

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    Wow. I loved this story
    You had me Laughing at times, Crying at times, murderous at times and at the end... just wow. i loved it. Bestestestest!
    March 15th, 2009 at 12:33am
  • brittanygeeze

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    Aww what a beautiful ending.
    Really, it was.
    And I think it's fantastic that the the kids are together.
    That's cute.
    Prooves why Brian and Raven weren't meant to be.
    Because their kids were meant to be.

    Awwww.
    Tooooo Cute.

    Would you read some of my stories?
    This one was fabulous, maybe you could give me some pointers to make mine sooo freaking good like this one.

    -brittany

    oh btw congrats on 50 chapters and 140 subscribers... amazing!
    March 7th, 2009 at 11:48am
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    Aw it's over?! sad times dude!

    i loved reading this story and everything about it because it was so real. it pulled me in from the first chapter and kept me there til the last.

    and now i'm off to read your other stories!
    March 3rd, 2009 at 03:47pm
  • CheYenneDisAster

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    Im so sad it's over!
    Ugh!
    Bummer, but I loved EVERY chapter of it.
    You're amazing.
    Love ya' girll :]
    March 2nd, 2009 at 03:16am
  • rawrz0rz

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    Awe, this story was so good.
    I loved how it ended, very cute!
    March 1st, 2009 at 11:39pm
  • Christyrose

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    It's a really good story.
    March 1st, 2009 at 06:05am
  • ShaleseRayEen

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    I'm not one that is much for words so I just picture/think of every godd thing that you can think of that you would hope and i know people would say about your writting/stories; combined all of those together and that is what I think.:)
    March 1st, 2009 at 01:47am
  • Lost Cause

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    I loved the ending! I'm really sad to see that it's over, but you wrote the ending perfectly. And our kids hooked up! lol.

    Love ya!
    February 28th, 2009 at 07:52pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Hahaha, You did do it! And a big congratulations to you for reaching the 50 mark! *throws confetti*

    It was a nice wrap up. I wasn't actually expecting it, so it was nice seeing the email notification for the story one last time :)

    I love how it ended so perfectly happy. They deserved it after the crazy rollercoaster that was their lives and relationship throughout the story. So many ups and downs, but it all worked out for each of them, so that's fantastic.

    Really enjoyed it and look forward to more from you =)
    February 28th, 2009 at 07:43pm
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    this story was amazing
    i loved how u added shit that we didnt even see coming!!!
    ur an amazing writter and i cant wait for more a7x stories from u =D

    ps- we sooo gotta meet up 1 day =D

    -Kierstyn Gatesss
    February 28th, 2009 at 06:22pm
  • jess.taylor

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    I loved it :D
    February 28th, 2009 at 05:09pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I'm so sad it's over, but I loved it!
    Awesome story, so glad Brian found someone too!
    February 28th, 2009 at 07:46am
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

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    OMG Audrey that is one of the best stories I have ever read and I'm sad it ended! But at the same time happy because it was a good ending.
    Linds is cute! lol. So was Andy.
    Hell Yeah Tara stole Mr. Haner's heart! It's just cause she's that awesome! lol

    This story is incribly amazing and it's gonna be in my mind for a long time!
    February 28th, 2009 at 07:33am
  • Lost Cause

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    I can’t believe it’s almost over…only one more left :(

    I do believe that this was my favorite chapter. It had all the best moments in it, so the memories were just perfect. No one could have done better a job. It was absolutely amazing, hun!
    February 24th, 2009 at 01:41am
  • CheYenneDisAster

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    LOVED IT!
    I absolutly loved it.
    It was so sweet :]
    February 24th, 2009 at 12:15am
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    OMG YAY =D
    MARRIED LIFE COMING!!!! =D=D=D LOL
    WO!! =D
    <33!!
    February 23rd, 2009 at 11:03pm
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

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    OMG i want to cry! it's over! AHHHHH!!!!
    The chapter was so amaizng though! It was written abosulotly beautifuly!
    I love the flashback in there!
    February 23rd, 2009 at 09:30pm