NCIS: Jethro's Secret - Comments

  • Fueled By Dana

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    I like it! Update soon, please!
    June 9th, 2007 at 04:58am
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    I have a question to ask though...
    June 8th, 2007 at 02:43pm
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    Josipa:
    Die, you're making me cry. In a positive way. A cry of happiness. I feel like jumping around and... Screaming and all that jazz. OMG Wow I'm shaking, really. I am. You can't even imagine how much it means to me. Thank you from the bottom of my pounding heart <33333333333

    I'll get you the autographs from the crew :D

    "You write as if you are sitting in front of the t.v and watching the actual show." You can't imagine how much it touched my heart. That's the only thing I wanted to do, to make people feel as if they're watching the show on TV (:
    You earned the good comments! I doubt anyone would have to say anything bad about it coz you kickass at writing!
    June 8th, 2007 at 02:42pm
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    Josipa:
    Bastard Son.:
    Watch it.
    I'm crazy enough to go through with the idea. :lmfao
    People often put such ideas in my head. xD
    Update Charlie and Dante. I'm just putting an idea in your dirrrrty, congested with naughtiness, head (:
    You're sidetracking me. xD Tsk, tsk, tsk. :lmfao
    June 8th, 2007 at 02:17pm
  • Josipa

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    Bastard Son.:
    Watch it.
    I'm crazy enough to go through with the idea. :lmfao
    People often put such ideas in my head. xD
    Update Charlie and Dante. I'm just putting an idea in your dirrrrty, congested with naughtiness, head (:
    June 8th, 2007 at 02:15pm
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    Josipa:
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    Josipa:
    You made it look like Tony was confuzed :lmfao

    I get it, you Bastard Son [with a dot] (:

    I can make you a NCIS T-shirt :lmfao You wanna be Gibbs's desciple? Or maybe Abby's?

    What mademe laugh the most is "BUT then I remembered it was you who's writing this." :lmfao

    THAT was flattering. Really. *bows down to you* Merci.
    :lmfao
    Abby is the wackiest Gibbsionist ever.
    Yes, there's a religion. Gibbsionism.
    The main prayer - Oh, our coffee who art in heaven... (...) Save us Gibbs, smack us on the head. Jethro.
    :lmfao I think I'm losing it.
    You lost it :lmfao

    Next time you go to church, make sure you say that prayer :lmfao
    Watch it.
    I'm crazy enough to go through with the idea. :lmfao
    People often put such ideas in my head. xD
    June 8th, 2007 at 02:13pm
  • Josipa

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    Bastard Son.:
    Josipa:
    You made it look like Tony was confuzed :lmfao

    I get it, you Bastard Son [with a dot] (:

    I can make you a NCIS T-shirt :lmfao You wanna be Gibbs's desciple? Or maybe Abby's?

    What mademe laugh the most is "BUT then I remembered it was you who's writing this." :lmfao

    THAT was flattering. Really. *bows down to you* Merci.
    :lmfao
    Abby is the wackiest Gibbsionist ever.
    Yes, there's a religion. Gibbsionism.
    The main prayer - Oh, our coffee who art in heaven... (...) Save us Gibbs, smack us on the head. Jethro.
    :lmfao I think I'm losing it.
    You lost it :lmfao

    Next time you go to church, make sure you say that prayer :lmfao
    June 8th, 2007 at 02:12pm
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    Josipa:
    You made it look like Tony was confuzed :lmfao

    I get it, you Bastard Son [with a dot] (:

    I can make you a NCIS T-shirt :lmfao You wanna be Gibbs's desciple? Or maybe Abby's?

    What mademe laugh the most is "BUT then I remembered it was you who's writing this." :lmfao

    THAT was flattering. Really. *bows down to you* Merci.
    :lmfao
    Abby is the wackiest Gibbsionist ever.
    Yes, there's a religion. Gibbsionism.
    The main prayer - Oh, our coffee who art in heaven... (...) Save us Gibbs, smack us on the head. Jethro.
    :lmfao I think I'm losing it.
    June 8th, 2007 at 02:08pm
  • Josipa

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    Kerplunk Girl:
    "Their silent footsteps down the stairs, wrapped in a sound of pounding hearts magnified their anticipation. Walking on eggshells and preparing themselves for a scenario they were about to face, did not let them fear. Or hesitate. Gibbs knocked the door down; a frontier between an image in their minds, their ignited hearts and image of mischievous reality."

    I don't know how in the hell you write like that, it makes me jealous. :cheese:
    I seriously [still] do think that you could be a writer for the show! No joke either.
    You write as if you are sitting in front of the t.v and watching the actual show.
    And you have a criminal [in a good way] mind, figuring out all these plots!


    If Josipa gets a job writing scripts, all I have to say it...I LOVED HER STORIES FIRST! :tehe:
    Die, you're making me cry. In a positive way. A cry of happiness. I feel like jumping around and... Screaming and all that jazz. OMG Wow I'm shaking, really. I am. You can't even imagine how much it means to me. Thank you from the bottom of my pounding heart <33333333333

    I'll get you the autographs from the crew :D

    "You write as if you are sitting in front of the t.v and watching the actual show." You can't imagine how much it touched my heart. That's the only thing I wanted to do, to make people feel as if they're watching the show on TV (:
    June 8th, 2007 at 02:03pm
  • Josipa

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    Bastard Son.:
    The ending... What? Wow :lmfao
    Let me explain.

    I was positive DiNozzo was there.
    BUT then I remembered it was you who's writing this.
    And I was confused for a second.
    NO TONY.
    And the Wow face was for the twist.

    :lmfao
    That didn't even make sense. XD
    You made it look like Tony was confuzed :lmfao

    I get it, you Bastard Son [with a dot] (:

    I can make you a NCIS T-shirt :lmfao You wanna be Gibbs's desciple? Or maybe Abby's?

    What mademe laugh the most is "BUT then I remembered it was you who's writing this." :lmfao

    THAT was flattering. Really. *bows down to you* Merci.
    June 8th, 2007 at 02:00pm
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    "Their silent footsteps down the stairs, wrapped in a sound of pounding hearts magnified their anticipation. Walking on eggshells and preparing themselves for a scenario they were about to face, did not let them fear. Or hesitate. Gibbs knocked the door down; a frontier between an image in their minds, their ignited hearts and image of mischievous reality."

    I don't know how in the hell you write like that, it makes me jealous. :cheese:
    I seriously [still] do think that you could be a writer for the show! No joke either.
    You write as if you are sitting in front of the t.v and watching the actual show.
    And you have a criminal [in a good way] mind, figuring out all these plots!


    If Josipa gets a job writing scripts, all I have to say it...I LOVED HER STORIES FIRST! :tehe:
    June 8th, 2007 at 01:58pm
  • Bastard Son.

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    The ending... What? Wow :lmfao
    Let me explain.

    I was positive DiNozzo was there.
    BUT then I remembered it was you who's writing this.
    And I was confused for a second.
    NO TONY.
    And the Wow face was for the twist.

    :lmfao
    That didn't even make sense. XD
    June 8th, 2007 at 01:56pm
  • Josipa

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    Bastard Son.:
    “I miss him, Kate. I never thought I would but I miss that kid; his feet on the desk, stupid descriptions of his dates. I miss smacking him on the back of his head.” Gibbs smiled. “But God help me, I’ll kill him when he gets back smiling at me.” Gibbs said taking off his cap and wiping the little sweat drops off his forehead.

    “It’s Tony, Gibbs, a lovable annoyance,” Kate said smiling; burying her anxiety deep down in her heart. “He’ll just pop in asking if we missed him. It’s Tony.”


    This is a classic. I loved every word! Smiley Gibbs just pwns my stripey socks.

    And the ending... What? Wow I'm confused. That's basically a good thing. XD
    Danke schon (: I don't know where's that 'o' with the dots (:

    I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, it so is a classic. It was hard for all of them, struggling with anxiety inside, smiling on the outside to cover their true emotions. I'm glad that Gibbs exploded :tehe:

    :lmfao It looks like I'm commenting on my own story :lmfao

    I ended the previous chapter with Gibbs smashing the basement door. I thought everyone'd expect to see DiNozzo inside. But he wasn't there. I kinda liked that plot twist. I thought people'd be surprised.

    And the ending... What?
    June 8th, 2007 at 01:22pm
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    “I miss him, Kate. I never thought I would but I miss that kid; his feet on the desk, stupid descriptions of his dates. I miss smacking him on the back of his head.” Gibbs smiled. “But God help me, I’ll kill him when he gets back smiling at me.” Gibbs said taking off his cap and wiping the little sweat drops off his forehead.

    “It’s Tony, Gibbs, a lovable annoyance,” Kate said smiling; burying her anxiety deep down in her heart. “He’ll just pop in asking if we missed him. It’s Tony.”


    This is a classic. I loved every word! Smiley Gibbs just pwns my stripey socks.

    And the ending... What? Wow I'm confused. That's basically a good thing. XD
    June 8th, 2007 at 01:14pm
  • Josipa

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    Bastard Son.:
    That face is priceless. Like the Mastercard commercial: One speeding ticket: 100$; One near-death experience: 2 000$; One wrecked car: 9 000$ Kate's face when Gibbs finally hits the brakes: priceless. XDDD

    :lmfao

    I'm an idiot.
    And I love you (:

    :lmfao
    June 8th, 2007 at 12:21pm
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    That face is priceless. Like the Mastercard commercial: One speeding ticket: 100$; One near-death experience: 2 000$; One wrecked car: 9 000$ Kate's face when Gibbs finally hits the brakes: priceless. XDDD

    :lmfao

    I'm an idiot.
    June 8th, 2007 at 12:20pm
  • Josipa

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    Bastard Son.:
    DON'T DO THAT TO ME! [/capsabuse]
    Now I have to wait 'till that marvellous day. XD

    Traffic. Gibbs should know better than take the car. A chopper would have been just fine. XDD
    You know how 'good' Gibbs is at driving :tehe: I mean, he drives fast. Which always makes me laugh (: + the expressions on Kate's face *giggles to self*

    And, tbh, I HAVE TO DO THAT TO YOU :D
    June 8th, 2007 at 12:08pm
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    DON'T DO THAT TO ME! [/capsabuse]
    Now I have to wait 'till that marvellous day. XD

    Traffic. Gibbs should know better than take the car. A chopper would have been just fine. XDD
    June 8th, 2007 at 12:01pm
  • Josipa

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    Bastard Son.:
    GO GO GO GO GO GO GO! :cheese:
    Finally. What took them so long?!
    I bet Tony's gonna be uber-glad to see Kate all sweaty and worried. XD
    Hehe, great update!

    Die is right, you know? Now... I shall go check on Sean.

    Just felt the need to tell you - I had a CSI marathon last night. First HTV, then OBN and then the old episodes on DVDs. XD
    Traffic LOL

    Boy, you'll be surprised with the chapter number 7 :tehe:
    June 8th, 2007 at 11:59am
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    GO GO GO GO GO GO GO! :cheese:
    Finally. What took them so long?!
    I bet Tony's gonna be uber-glad to see Kate all sweaty and worried. XD
    Hehe, great update!

    Die is right, you know? Now... I shall go check on Sean.

    Just felt the need to tell you - I had a CSI marathon last night. First HTV, then OBN and then the old episodes on DVDs. XD
    June 8th, 2007 at 11:33am