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    Ooh. Someone got out of bed on the wrong side. :|
    You're keeping it thrilling. Good job.

    I LOVE the Monkeys' lyrics in the chapter description section. They're so cool :cheese:
    May 26th, 2007 at 01:30pm
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    Sherlock:
    I know. I haven't been online much lately. :|

    As far as I'm concerned you can write till 5 am if it makes you update.
    I'm being really impatient here.
    Not that I'm pushing you to write smth. Take your time if necessary.
    4 NCIS chapters are ready (: Writing 'till 3 AM got paid off LOL. I'll update soon (:
    May 26th, 2007 at 11:38am
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    I know. I haven't been online much lately. :|

    As far as I'm concerned you can write till 5 am if it makes you update.
    I'm being really impatient here.
    Not that I'm pushing you to write smth. Take your time if necessary.
    May 26th, 2007 at 11:22am
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    Sherlock:
    I prepared for quoting, but have just now seen that Sara already quoted that sentence.

    He knew that talking to Gibbs on a low caffeine level was equal to making out with a transvestite.
    That was hilarious. I like your sense of humour and the way you blend it with the story - sometimes not so noticeable, but extremely effective.
    And you surely know where to end a chapter. Write more, person! :mrgreen:
    Dr. Watson!!1 It's so AWESOMELY AWESME to see you here Wow

    I will write more (: I just told Sara that I had been writing 'till 3 AM (:

    MERCI POUR LE COMMENT (it's some kind of a French-English mixture) <3
    May 26th, 2007 at 11:18am
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    I prepared for quoting, but have just now seen that Sara already quoted that sentence.

    He knew that talking to Gibbs on a low caffeine level was equal to making out with a transvestite.
    That was hilarious. I like your sense of humour and the way you blend it with the story - sometimes not so noticeable, but extremely effective.
    And you surely know where to end a chapter. Write more, person! :mrgreen:
    May 26th, 2007 at 11:14am
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    Bastard Son.:
    It was exactly like that - like a real episode. You did a great job. :D
    Really? Wow

    I'm grinning like Grinch himself *jimps around*

    THANK YOU <3
    May 26th, 2007 at 10:57am
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    It was exactly like that - like a real episode. You did a great job. :D
    May 26th, 2007 at 10:49am
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    I'm glad you liked it (: I do love that show as well (: Dram, suspense, humor... All at the same time (: Hilarious :D

    I just hope that you could really imagine Gibbs saying all of that, practicing his slap on DiNozzo's head. That was my point. I wanted it to be like one written episode :D
    May 26th, 2007 at 10:17am
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    He knew that talking to Gibbs on a low caffeine level was equal to making out with a transvestite. An adolescent explanation. In Tony’s style. :lmfao

    I loved the intro. It made me so happy to see you've written an NCIS story because I love that show so, so , so much. And Gibbs was hilarious here. This makes a crappy comment, I know, but it's the best thing I can come up with at the moment. x]

    You made a few typos, btw., but nothing big, I'm just being a nag today because it's scorching outside.

    Can't wait for more. Seriously. More, woman.
    May 25th, 2007 at 04:15pm
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