so i read thw whole story in twenty minutes. it was really good and made me feel sad because my sister heather was raped and molested by my father, who was her step father, for seven years. i walked in on it once and i didnt know what was going on because i was 9. but...it was still sad to read those parts thinking of what my father did to her. he's getting out of jail on july 31.
anyway, you are a good writing. i like how you write. its very good. and i like the name marc rider for some reason, its like what the nurse said about the novel thing. :] i am going to read the sequal now. i just htought to comment you because you would say it all the time. haha