June 17th, 2009 at 06:15pm
I think.
That Stephanie Meyers couldn't have wrote it better herself. This is probably the first twific I've read and enjoyed. I loved how you got the being of Edward there, his vocabulary and his thought processes. I like that you didn't stray from 1st person not one bit.
I also like how Carlisle acted in the story, him finding Esme. I find it neat that you pieced that whole in the story about him. It's mainly what drew me to pick this out of your stories to review.
I also appreciate your matching things parts up with the actual story. At least it seemed that way to me. If she were to let you finish the rest of the books in Edwards' point of view, I would read them. Your description was just amazing, how things looked, and felt from his point.
I thank you for writing this, it has made my week.
And I shall now be reading some more of your stories.
:arms:
~the Artist