January 31st, 2015 at 07:33am
From comment swap.
I love the lay out, it's simple and effective and the colors work well. The story itself is well written and you're clearly a very talented writer and it makes me want to read more of you, even though this isn't my typical type of fic.
Very good job! :)
I love the lay out, it's simple and effective and the colors work well. The story itself is well written and you're clearly a very talented writer and it makes me want to read more of you, even though this isn't my typical type of fic.
Very good job! :)
Ugh that cut off, but as well I really love the character of Devon and learning more about him. You effectively get who is he across and what he is going through.
You discuss setting well and and it's very clear with what is going on in the story. The personalities are clear and it's refreshing to read a story that is so well proofread and interesting with a great plot as well.
Overall, the only reason I wouldn't continue with this story is because it isn't exactly my personal style. But you're a very gifted writer and would be interested in reading more of your stories in the future. I do enjoy your writing style. Your attention to detail is amazing and your descriptions are very amusing. It weaves and wines and I love it. As well, You don't give away too much information and you get the readers curious. Even as someone who is absolutely not into this type of story, I can see the appeal in it.