Ahaha, the summary was entertaining and well written even if it was short. Especially when you said to laugh at James for falling into a trap! :XD I enjoy the Black Parade as well *high five*
I would have loved to see a boy cry and have a tear hanging from their eye socket. I wouldn't call him a pussy or a little gay boy, I'd probably just take a picture of his purple frozen face then call the ambulence or something. :weird
Wow, that girl really is strong. ._. She carried him to his house while running in a blizzard? Wow. >_>
I thought this was funny. :lmfao "Mom! Oh my fucking god, mom!" she screamed, dropping down to my side and checking the pulse in my neck. "I'm alive stupid..." I hissed... :XD
Okay, if they were really that worried then why didn't they go out looking for him in the blizzard? I mean, they wouldn't have been so comfortable in their home knowing boy is out in a blizzard, almost dying. :file: Hence to the part where his twin sister opens the door and she is wearing a robe and slippers. :coffee: Gee, how much they cared. :shock: “Oh my god, I’m so glad you’re alive! When you didn’t come home and you didn’t answer your phone we thought you had gotten killed in the snow storm!” my mom exclaimed peeling my melting hoodie off. (Nice description of the hoodie being "peeled" off. Very creative! :mrgreen: )
What you said in the bottom of chapter one, I can relate to. I don't like guys or girls in any special way. *high five* :crazy: I can admire them, be friends with, but that's it. Nothing more. Great ending for chapter one And I didn't expect this to be a romance story. Weird. I am into anything you write, and this...this is something new. I'm reading it and I'm going to subscribe!! So you better update!
Gah, I love your descriptions!! They are not like any other writer I know!!
Awesome! I wish I had a sister to cook for me!! But, I have a brother who bakes me cookies and serves me ice cream. :tehe: I think I'm better off the way I am living.
I love her gothic-modern dress. :yah I want it. :cute: I only have one, and I would like to have another one. :tehe:
:twitch: Electrical wave or cold skin? From Twilight? :cheese: Not everyone gets that feeling. Its sometimes rare. And it doesn't have to happen just so you know you are meant to be with someone. :file: Ahaha, that is a good point. Bella saving Edward :XD Though, its (the girl with green eyes...so far I don't know her name. Interesting :weird ) and Theo. :}
*screams* I love her name!!! I honestly do. Best name I've heard of in a long, long while. Jersey Vinetti is perfect. My Chemical Romance came from New Jersey. :tehe: I don't know where [Vinetti came from, but its a beautiful last name. :cute:
Aw, what a nice ending.I like to hug people now a day. Something I wasn't really into. But you know since I have had this depression thing going on, a friend suggested it since it worked for her and so...it actually does kind of work. But I don't ever want to let go when I'm hugging someone.
This amazing! I love love love it. Update really really really soon. If you need help I can attempt to help but with me being add in all i might not be much help. Haha.
This amazing! I love love love it. Update really really really soon. If you need help I can attempt to help but with me being add in all i might not be much help. Haha.
I would have loved to see a boy cry and have a tear hanging from their eye socket. I wouldn't call him a pussy or a little gay boy, I'd probably just take a picture of his purple frozen face then call the ambulence or something. :weird
Wow, that girl really is strong. ._. She carried him to his house while running in a blizzard? Wow. >_>
I thought this was funny. :lmfao "Mom! Oh my fucking god, mom!" she screamed, dropping down to my side and checking the pulse in my neck.
"I'm alive stupid..." I hissed... :XD
Okay, if they were really that worried then why didn't they go out looking for him in the blizzard? I mean, they wouldn't have been so comfortable in their home knowing boy is out in a blizzard, almost dying. :file: Hence to the part where his twin sister opens the door and she is wearing a robe and slippers. :coffee: Gee, how much they cared. :shock:
“Oh my god, I’m so glad you’re alive! When you didn’t come home and you didn’t answer your phone we thought you had gotten killed in the snow storm!” my mom exclaimed peeling my melting hoodie off. (Nice description of the hoodie being "peeled" off. Very creative! :mrgreen: )
What you said in the bottom of chapter one, I can relate to. I don't like guys or girls in any special way. *high five* :crazy: I can admire them, be friends with, but that's it. Nothing more.
Great ending for chapter one
And I didn't expect this to be a romance story.
Gah, I love your descriptions!! They are not like any other writer I know!!
Awesome! I wish I had a sister to cook for me!! But, I have a brother who bakes me cookies and serves me ice cream. :tehe: I think I'm better off the way I am living.
I love her gothic-modern dress. :yah I want it. :cute: I only have one, and I would like to have another one. :tehe:
:twitch: Electrical wave or cold skin? From Twilight? :cheese: Not everyone gets that feeling. Its sometimes rare. And it doesn't have to happen just so you know you are meant to be with someone. :file: Ahaha, that is a good point. Bella saving Edward :XD Though, its (the girl with green eyes...so far I don't know her name. Interesting :weird ) and Theo. :}
*screams* I love her name!!! I honestly do. Best name I've heard of in a long, long while. Jersey Vinetti is perfect. My Chemical Romance came from New Jersey. :tehe: I don't know where [Vinetti came from, but its a beautiful last name. :cute:
Aw, what a nice ending.I like to hug people now a day. Something I wasn't really into. But you know since I have had this depression thing going on, a friend suggested it since it worked for her and so...it actually does kind of work. But I don't ever want to let go when I'm hugging someone.
You have to update. Please?
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