A Sesshomaru Lemon - Comments

I would definitely read the story.
And funny thing, I am watching Alice in Woderland at the moment. You can imagine my face when I saw the quore lol!!
Please make it a story

i would love to read the story if you wrote one!!

go for it have fun wiritng:)

I liked your story it really good

more please

That was awesome!

that would be wonderful haha

go for it

i think you should do a story that would be pretty cool

Loved the story but i have a question about the end when they ran into each other and kio said it was to bad she can't have kids. What did that whole moment mean?

I forgot a "You" inbetween to an about in the third line. sorry. --.-- I also mis-spelled False. >.< And Amazing too. G**-damn it.

I'm memorized by Kio's fox forms. Both are quite beautiful.

And you are the first to capture Sesshomaru's attitude perfectly. He is mostly emotionless, except towards Rin, of course. You also got all of his magenta stripes. Most don't.

Heh. He's in heat. :D It's really funny how Sesshy wants Kio so much from a natural heat cycle with animals and demons alike.

Anyways, I loved the Lemon One Shot, and no, I won't get onto to about anything that was a flase or anything. Your writing was amazin, and no mis-spellings. :D I can't do that. I always mis-spell at least one word.

this was really good u should make more :)

if u mean lemons, i can try but this year i went into a creative writing class and my teach is making me do so much writing and not my stories! i will try to do more but i will need requests and, if i dont know what it is, i will need to watch/read the characters or plot of it.

hey r u goin to make more your gud at stories

that was good i was loling through most of ur story

I really loved this! Amazing!
It made me laugh at times.
=]

your story was amazing..i liked it a lot ^_^
though i though Rin got in the way too much. hehe
but i dont mind. she's really cute in the anime

This is the first thing I've read since I registered on here, and that was great!
Amazing job =]

wow. . . that was amazing o.o
great job =)