Never Meant To Be - Comments

  • dr. faustus

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    Idee Fixe.:
    awesome-ness.
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    love it.
    Yes way to go In Love
    August 29th, 2007 at 01:26am
  • Idee Fixe.

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    awesome-ness.
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    love it.
    August 28th, 2007 at 06:32pm
  • Deimos

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    That was really original, and very intreaguing. I can't wait for more. I like it. ^_^
    August 28th, 2007 at 03:42pm
  • smidget

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    Well what are you waiting for, keep the pages coming. I love this story.
    August 19th, 2007 at 12:26am
  • ALoserWithStyle

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    GAH!
    I love this, nad!
    It's fantastic!
    I'm definatly subscribing!
    August 3rd, 2007 at 09:23pm
  • HeavenLostAGerard

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    this story is amazing, well written!
    *subscribes* :)
    July 22nd, 2007 at 08:14pm
  • charming.

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    :] Very rad update ^-^

    "Werewolves!" hehe. And then she tries to run .. after they saved her .. how ungrateful lol.

    I like the linking between characters and stuff, it's cool. Lookin' forward to the next chapter ^-^
    July 18th, 2007 at 09:15pm
  • starless eyes

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    amazing update. =] can't wait for the next one.
    July 18th, 2007 at 12:21am
  • Idee Fixe.

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    [ sorry i didn't review last night >,< }

    Absolutely love the chapter. Great job on the chappie, nad :)
    And the story is very unique and creative, in a very good way.

    Chaa~ Nadine and Mikee.. you guys make a great story together :DD
    July 16th, 2007 at 08:41pm
  • dr. faustus

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    I loved this update :)
    nice way to leave the ending like that. I have to read more now.
    July 16th, 2007 at 03:16am
  • supernova.

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    An update! xD

    On chaper three I found a spelling mistake. You spelt 'because' as 'coz', which isn't a word.

    Other than that, well done! Clap

    Sorry, I'm too lazy to give a proper review right now.
    ...forgive me? :tehe:
    xx
    July 16th, 2007 at 02:36am
  • illegally_legal

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    at last she finally updates ^_^
    I guess this means it's my turn now ^____^
    July 15th, 2007 at 09:11pm
  • gdaywolfbane

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    I love the plot. vampires and werewolves are awesome. I had some trouble reading though, cause the color text was too dark I think. other than that, the story itself was well-written. continue!
    June 29th, 2007 at 06:00pm
  • dr. faustus

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    I read the first chapter and AWESOME!!!! I liked it. I liked how it stared out. The story line was great. The descriptions were great. Your a great writer and I can tell this will be a great story. Nice, and have a great day. (=
    June 16th, 2007 at 09:33pm
  • KilljoyAriel

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    ooooh!! :tehe: this looks good.... though I'm getting lost with all the names... I'll have to read it a couple of times to get a hold of it... I like Frakie being a ghost... and Brendon being a vampire... will Ryro and Mikey make an appearance???

    yeah... I think I'll subscribe to this one....
    June 16th, 2007 at 08:12am
  • Tre the Cool.

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    I read the first chapter, and I like it. I think the idea of Frank being a ghost was pretty cool. I've never read a story like that before.
    June 15th, 2007 at 11:32pm
  • charming.

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    I like it. A tad confusing in some spots, following the plot, characters, etc lol.
    But looking forward to the werewolves *squeeee* coming in. ^^

    subscribbled.
    June 12th, 2007 at 12:55pm
  • The Way

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    The story is actually coming along nicely... you two could work on adding more description, suspense and 'showing, not telling,' but otherwise, it's actually pretty good. The plot, I feel, is building up to an awesome climax. :D

    Btw, did this for the Cult. Comment on me and Fish Camp's Matters?
    June 12th, 2007 at 12:31pm
  • starless eyes

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    amazing.

    haha and i thought it was interesting, i was reading this story and what's it feel like to be a ghost by tbs came on my itunes.
    June 12th, 2007 at 02:00am
  • SomethingEdge

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    yes cant wait for more
    and the other races to come in
    ray?
    June 11th, 2007 at 04:19pm