This story is very interesting ... a little different from some other fan fictions about The Joker. Ivy seems like a well-developed character, and I feel as if I can easily connect with her by chapter two. Jinx just comes with the deal. I do wish your chapters were longer. :)
I can totally see that scene with Joker and Happy =3 I have to admit that once I read that Ivy was back with Joker all I wanted to know was where her dog was x] I guess I'm more of an animal person that a people person lol =] Anyways this was an awesome update and I hope you can update again soon ;]
"Looking around the room though, she realised that she wasn’t in caring hands but instead she was back in malicious claws. " THAT LINE IS EPIC! LEGENDARY! I love it. it took an awesome imagination and very professional use of language to come up with that. Thats my new favourite line ^_^ Shame it took so long to update though. What was the delay? if you dont mind me asking that is.
I love this chapter, even if it is short. It just reads beautifully. I love how you really captured it, the imagery is amazing. I can't wait to read more and find out a little bit more about the Joker/ Jack.
Well, it's been a while since I commented - apologies.First and foremost, he got her a puppy! and a cute puppy at that. Gordon seems like such a git to Ivy, bless her, it's not like it was her fault. Jinx has disapeared, or has she? Wonder if they'll all get out safely - I just hope that Happy is okay :omfg:
A great set of chapters, I love the detail and description you give - especially describing how Ivy changed once she started her medication again.
That truly has to be the most summarised comment i've ever given you... Good luck in your exams! I could tell you this at school, but you might appreciate it in a comment as well :arms:
It was short. Very short. But the description was perfect. I feel you could have emphasized more on the fear that Ivy was feeling at the time. Good work. Hope you update soon?