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  • Star Angel

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    Update soon this is really good
    June 18th, 2011 at 11:07am
  • Bananabred

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    I love it! I just read the chapter, hypnotherapy, and it's awesome! Never delete this story!XD
    June 7th, 2011 at 04:02am
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    June 5th, 2011 at 03:34pm
  • Bananabred

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    I love this book! i hope luke is okay, he sounds really gullible though.
    April 23rd, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • Frozen December Moon

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    I just started reading this story today and I absolutely love it. I tried to read fast so I could get to the next chapter... very addicting. :)
    January 7th, 2011 at 06:42pm
  • Deanie

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    Keep on writing, its really good. I look forward to what is happening next. You said critisim is good and I thought, of all the things what would I want you to do better what would I want you to change. I sat there for 10 minutes and I couldn't think of a thing. Not one. That proves how good your story is. xoxox
    September 4th, 2010 at 07:32pm
  • drunken-lizard

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    I ABSOLUTLEY love this! Your summary got me hooked!! Exspecially when you said "With liz, will Ronnie have the power to kill?" That is AMAZING! That captured my attention and I couldn't help myself to read it ;) I like your writting style. It's descriptive and makes everything feel real. Like the scene where ronnie had the dream of her father having his hands around her neck. Powerful stuff. GREAT work! I'm definatley suscribing >:D
    August 28th, 2010 at 03:03am
  • goldchains

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    I Absolutley Love This ! Your An Amazing Writer; I Have To Say. :DD
    Job Well Done(:
    July 18th, 2010 at 10:55am
  • Lovely Minnie Minty

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    I really liked the end of chapter ten when Chase smiles :) I love the story line so far!
    July 10th, 2010 at 09:57am
  • brokenarrow

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    ooh someone is starting to have a crush!!!
    December 29th, 2009 at 08:49pm
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    aw!!!
    June 30th, 2009 at 05:59pm
  • someone1330

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    PomPam:
    That is a really emotional and touching story. You're an amazing writer, well done =D
    June 28th, 2009 at 04:08pm
  • PomPam

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    That is a really emotional and touching story. You're an amazing writer, well done =D
    June 28th, 2009 at 03:02pm
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    aww!!!

    Cute chapter!
    June 8th, 2009 at 03:50am
  • Ave.Maria.

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    Well, I truthfully had hit quite a wall with this story. But your comment has really encouraged me to continue. Thankyou (:
    June 1st, 2009 at 10:44pm
  • Donks

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    You really are amazing at writing, I mean the characters were perfectly created to the point where I didn't want Liz to go anywhere either.

    Please don't tell me you've stopped writing this story?
    I really want to see where it goes.
    June 1st, 2009 at 08:30pm
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    NOO!!!!!
    Poor Liz!
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    That's so sad!
    January 31st, 2009 at 07:20pm
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    aw,
    I like this story so far!
    Update soon?
    January 28th, 2009 at 06:11pm
  • Lovely Minnie Minty

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    Aw, poor Ronnie! I really like it update soon!
    December 21st, 2008 at 09:10pm
  • Lost In Space

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    wow. i love it.
    December 21st, 2008 at 06:35pm
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