December 29th, 2008 at 06:12pm
I dunno if this was meant for me to read cause it was written for other people but eh. Whatever. I must read everything you write cause you got a talent. And plus this band has got the "ooh hello" guy in it, if I'm not mistaken? :lmfao
Anyway. Feedback. :tehe:
The opening was dead sweet. Little nine year old kiddies and bah, George is mean for ruining Christmas for the three girlies. :file:
It was kind of sad when it was said that they hadn't turned up, when it was nearly lunch. It makes you wonder for a short while if they care.
Was sweet when they dressed up as Santa. :tehe: Because they'd ruined Santa in the first place, and then they turned up as Santa nine years later. It's like a big circle. :tehe:
You've written this very well, and it was very good.
Though I think he more than certainly made up for it (:
This was so sweet Nina & written so well :cute:
Loved it