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  • SHYLA01

    SHYLA01 (350)

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    This is a great story I can't really add anything because everyone has really said what I think! update :)
    January 28th, 2010 at 09:23am
  • Glamophonic

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    This an amazing story, to say the least. This is first story I've read about autism, especially that particular type of autism. I have someone in my family with it and the voice portrayed in this is dead on. As someone above mentioned, I also like how it's not centered on just autism. It's a pleasant twist.

    You have fantastic writing skills, I must say.
    December 28th, 2008 at 04:58am
  • kafka.

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    I read the story a few days ago and since then I've been turning it around in my head because I really liked it and I wanted to leave a comment expressing my gratitude. But the thing is that I don't write long nice reviews anymore - I'm a mean critical person now. Well, not really mean, just fed up with all the bad stories. So just angsty.

    Either way, that is why I didn't comment right after I read it. I've been thinking about it ever since, trying to find something flawed. Imagine my surprise when I failed at doing so. I really loved the story. I've read a few stories about autism so far, not enough one may argue, but I really love yours because it's one of the few that doesn't revolve around autism itself. I mean it does, but in a gentle light, the spotlight is not fixed on the illness.
    -shrug-

    Maybe the only thing that's not perfect is the fact that it's a chaptered story - thus you have to update it - thus I have to wait for an update [and I'm not a very patient person].
    :tehe:
    Seriously, it's a beautiful story. [But you already know that since you're the one who wrote it. v_v]
    December 26th, 2008 at 03:28pm
  • the lover.

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    Thanks for the comments guys. :cute:
    And yes, you will find out what biostratigraphy is. ;D
    December 24th, 2008 at 08:53pm
  • Spanish Lullaby

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    Very original. I like it.

    (Will we find out what Biostraighy(?) is later on)
    December 24th, 2008 at 07:57pm
  • asdfghjkimberly

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    This is so different from any stories I've read. I like it. A lot.
    December 22nd, 2008 at 01:09am