I Don't Love You - Comments

I really liked this. –nods-

If you just read it, you wouldn't have realized that English wasn't your first language. You have an amazing command of the lingo.

For the most part, the way that you imbedded lyrics in there, but a couple sounded a bit awkward.

Good job. =]

You injected so many lyrics into this it made my head spin, in the good way <3
I love it, I think it was amazing.

I'm Not Okay, Disenchanted, A bit of The Used "Take My Hand?" or maybe it was Our Lady Of Sorrows.

All in all, amazing job Lee! I loved every word! <3

Aww, wow that was a wicked powerful ending....aww I loved it!!!!!!

it reminded me of a girl i'd lost. very powerful, i liked it quite a lot. good job

This was so amazing, and sad.

I really loved how you fitted MCR lyrics into their speech. It was amazing.
:')

:'( This was really amazing and sad.
I loved it.

Awuh, i love this.
I love how you've added MCR lyrics to the story and made it work.
Very clever. :'D