May 26th, 2009 at 09:59am
:cheese:
That was so one of the best oneshots ever, and definitely the best descriptive but still non descriptive sex scene I've ever seen. I really love how you focused so much on describing the room and the colors, how the blue turned into red as everything heated up, and not as much on the actual actions.
Considering I knew that one of the guys didn't have real feelings for the other, I must say that I couldn't tell until the very end who had feelings for who, and that I think was really good. I love being surprised in the end, and that I was.
I mean, as it was mainly told with Tom's thoughts and such, it was probably going to be him who was hurt and left behind, but at many moments I felt that maybe he actually had no feelings for Danny. Because, he didn't know what his fascination wit hthe room was, so maybe he drew no connection with the room and being there with whom he was with.
You have a completely unique and amazing way of describing things, and it was so beautiful to read. It was detailed, yet not detailed in the way we usually see it in writing. If I were to describe it, I'd have to compare it to a painting, or a photograph, where you can only make out the silhouette of the boys, yet see everything completely clear. Just, wow.
i don't even have to state my opinion, it's already been clearly stated.
i just have one question,
cani have your babies?
and, here's another,
was it supposed to be sad?
because it seemed as though danny didn't care for tom, just wanted sex, fomr the last sentences. i don't know, maybe i'm just stupid for not catching on.
i love your classy works.
amazing.
but, now i'm just repeating what's already been said. you win at life.