Okay, so here's the comment I said I'd leave. What I wrote on your other story pretty much covers this story too.
Predictable, mushy, and corny. But still, that's what I wanted and that's what I got. I was entertained, I had a silly smile on my lips and I liked it.
If someone is looking for a deep and complicated story about heartache etc, no then your stories aren't a very good choice. But if someone is looking to be entertained by some cute romance, then this story is a very good choice.
Awwwwwwwwawawaw!! I loved this. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and i loved how the characters' emotions were portrayed. You did a great job and it bought more than a few smiles to my face :] x
OMG I CANT BELIEVE IT TOOK ME 10 CHAPTERS TO REALISE THAT YOU HAD STARTED A NEW STORY !!!!! this is sooooo super cute ... i was melting in my seat the whole time .. (accept when jake was in the picture) lol ...... great story .. love it ... love you !