Circo - Comments

Yay!
I love this story
One of my favorites.
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It's not going slow.
I like the pace it's at atm.
(:
I love the fact that Gerard's actually pretty fragile and stuff.
Gah, I just love this story so gosh darn much!
^_^
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I didn't think it was sketchy, I liked it =D

It's not going by slow, it has a very nice pace.
That was a good update, it was a very nice st up for the next chapter
and I can't await more :D

wow!
good update!

it's not slow. i like the pace. stories where everything happens to fast leaves you wondering if you missed something. and even though gerard may be a cock synical bastard, i think he's just fairly misunderstood. like a shy person. who knows. they could sing the loudest in teh shower! :) good story though. it leaves me waiting for posts. if ya get my drift. *hints at to update more but not to fast as to take away the creative writing from the story*

Hello :D
I've been subscribed to this story for a while, but I never got around to reading all of it...until today. I must say. you are a great writer.

This is one of the most original plot lines I've read on this site and you have very good plot points to back it up. Your use of language is very descriptive, so reading it just generates a perfect movie in my head. You're obviously not from the States, but you have a very good grasp on how we work here.

I read your journal, and it's a shame that you won't be on as much, but I understand you have more productive things to to and i hope all goes well and that you may return to write more for us soon.

But really, this story is fantastic and I can't wait for more.
I can't wait to see where Gerard and Frank's relationship goes :cute:

heyllo! lol new reader here! i love this story! it's so real! all the way from the way the circus is put up to gerard's extreme sexiness! lol gerards dad sounds like a douchbag though! no offense to him in this story. what if he did yellow and shrivel and cough? oh well. his problem! even though i do love him. i hope he doesn't smoke in real life. what if he does? I don't want him to yellow! *grabs phonebook to call Gerard and tell him about the many dangers of smoking and how he and mcr should stop.* lol naw but this story is awesome! i love the long chapters and the describtions! and go abba! ever heard of the a-teens? if you haven't,
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VGkBxHMxCZg
lol love this song. listened to them when i was little and danced with ma neighbor around her room. good times! keep writing strong!

I don't have anything to say except: *gasp* but also not really.

Isa was saying something about how sad something is when its not written to be sad, but just is. This kicks ass. :arms:

And you transitioned perfectly to Gerard's other side, the...human side. He's like...he's silk. Gerard is silk. He's seductive and light and god, so smooth, but he tears easy. Poor thing.

:arms: When Mibba fucks up while I'm trying to submit something I'm always almost close to tears. It's so awful.

They're getting closer! :crazy:
Even if it's just half an inch a time it's something and it's making me excited like you wouldn't know. It sucks that Mr Way had to interrupt Frank and Gerard's conversation when Gerard was for once opening up, although he seemd rather angry and annoyed with Frank's snooping and questioning. But every Frerard moment I get makes me a happy girl, so keep inching them forward, please :cute:

It's incredibly cute how Gerard quickly got back into his happy mood and started singing randomly again, too. Especially the ABBA songs. I might have mentioned it before, but Gerard Way singing ABBA is like a secret dream of mine, and this story makes me so happy because it has at least a fictional Gerard who loves ABBA. Thank you for that!

I wonder if Gerard gets hurt a lot during the show and his practices. Because something is making me feel that he might get hurt badly rather soon because he's trying too hard to impress his dad. It would of course be an opportunity for Frank to get closer again, but it would screw up Gerard's situation in the circus even more and he'd definitely end up kicked out.
Oh dear, I'm just rambling. Whatever happens I'm really excited about it, so just keep it coming! :arms:

:cheese:

...sorry. :shifty

Double.

I didn't get to comment the last chapter. :omgno:

Well, I simply love this spin you are giving to the whole story. Making this Circo life so rough and real is just what keeps me reading. It's not some perfect adventurous lifestyle, and as sick as it sounds I like to read about the struggles, the bad moments, the ugly side of it all.

It gives me a weird sensation everytime we are witnessing a 'happy' scene that's so bright and light, like the show itself, and then something hard hits you, like Gerard saying that if he can't get his act right, he'll be left out. That's really fucked up, your one father leaving you behind, but we are seeing this other side of Gerard I believe makes him even more interesting as a character.

The last part was my favorite. Frank pondering over life just out a simple thing as watching his 'co-worker' smoke and cough. And it can be perceived as routine, something you can see any day, but that's what makes it special. It's inevitable to compare someone so old and cringed and wasted, to this other person who oozes beauty.

Because that was the way reality works.
This is turning out to be how I hoped it would. Despite the Frerard, this has more elements to it and I seriously think it's awesome. :con:

I love that you've made Gerard have this totally human side to him, which he obviously doesn't let out much.
And I love the end bit where Frank is wondering what Gerard'll be like when he's older from his smoking.
ILOVEIT!
^_^
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'Ello :) Sorry about not commenting the last chapter, I haven't been home :cute:

So, Gerard's basically a hooker? I was not really expecting it, but still, it hardly came as a surprise. It kinda makes me think of him as a stripper, with how he shows off with his body and removes clothes before going backstage and to his trailer to have sex with some icky stranger. This makes the upcoming Frerard romance even more promising and I'm desperately awaiting the first moments of it.
This story is great and Gerard being used by his father like this is just brilliant.

I hope we'll have more soonish :tehe:

Da-yum.

See, I told you after that one-shot that I was expecting something amazing from you. And I'll admit that after that other Frerard, I was desperately disappointed, but baby this is what I was looking for and you delivered spectacularly.

This is the first story I'm subscribing to in a friggin LONG time. This is the first chaptered fic on here I've read by someone I don't usually read. This is the first chaptered Frerard on here in aaaaages that isn't utter shit. And not only that, its like, the opposite of shit. Its...fucking cool.

I'd also like to compliment the layout, which sets an absolute perfect mood. And I can see you've done your research, or at least you know what you're talking about instead of presenting this perfect circus world. I admit I was actually expecting a creepier Circus, like the one in Ghost Whisperer :shifty.

But this is just so amazing I cannot compliment you enough on it. Srsly. I love your writing style. And I love the voice you gave Frankie. Its...perfect. And Josie made me smile. The way she talks, and her mannerisms, I see like....I see a New York City hooker, or like, the Joker's girlfriend (if he could have any relationships, that is) or something. This is so perfect.

My favorite kinds of fanfiction are the ones that only use the characters, like stock characters. And this so falls into that category. I cannot cannot cannot wait for more and I am oozing with jealousy and admiration.

And this is my favorite part so far : I’d told her it didn’t matter, it was just one sequin and no-one would notice, but she just stared at me as though I’d told her that I’d killed her parents.

That’ll be the last time I ever choose to question a performer on their costumes.

:tehe: Made me laugh.

Is Gee okay?? o.o p.s loving the story :P

I can really see Gerard doing that act in my head. That man already has so much sex-appeal and you just... made it so much better. This plot is genius and everything is so original and real. My friend linked me your story when you put up the first chapter and I've been following ever since; I assumed you were getting a lot of comments for it so I always... ignored commenting it, but holy crap. 41 comments for this? I thought you'd be way over 100 by now. Let's face it... Well-written stories are going down... But keep the faith man, and I hope that the comments you get will be enough for you to keep writing.

That thing that was revealed about Gerard was genius too, FYI. I loved it. (:

Haha, Gerard's a bloody sexy beast!
;]
Loved the remark Frank made that Gerard did, in fact, have all night.
x]
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Fucking delicious! As motherfucking always. Ha.