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  • horsie890

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    Congratulations on second place. It was a really tough decision. You two are lucky I didn't resort to an alligator wrestling match to decide the winner. That was plan B.

    I loved this oneshot. First of all, I must admit, I don't like Panic (hate them, actually), but this was so adorable that I had to love it. You made me say awww. You should be very proud of yourself.

    I really like how it makes perfect sense. Little kids do things like that every day, and it's impossible to explain things to them. Ryan's little fit at the end made me laugh. This entire oneshot was very cute, if just a little sad. I felt bad for the characters.

    Your style seems very relaxed and easygoing, but not to the point of being lazy about things. The descriptions stuck in my mind well, and I love how you carried them through the entire scene. I really enjoyed it, and if I ever have one of these contests again, I hope you'll enter it.
    February 1st, 2009 at 08:37pm
  • silly ann murphy

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    I loved this.
    I liked the shortness and the simplicity of your words.
    I had fun reading it. I thought it was adorable.

    You're great at this, Zero.
    January 22nd, 2009 at 02:08pm
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