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  • VengeanceIsMine

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    Wow wasn't expecting that ending but great story :)
    May 10th, 2016 at 06:47am
  • mrsmshadz

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    @ hmcx
    That's exactly how I feel!!!!
    This story was good till it all went to shit at the end Shocked
    July 22nd, 2015 at 12:06pm
  • hmc09

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    I'm gonna sound like a bitch now cos if I'd known at the start they don't end up together I never would have spent my night reading this story cos that's the whole reason why I read it. It's a well written story though:)
    August 28th, 2012 at 12:22am
  • pawnsinplay

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    Love this as much as I loved it the first time.
    August 14th, 2012 at 04:22am
  • pawnsinplay

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    Now please excuse me while I re-read this.
    August 14th, 2012 at 01:18am
  • Christ!

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    You made me cry for 30 chapters.
    And now I'm bawling more because they didn't even get together : <

    A really good story, you described their feelings so well! I was crying and crying and crying (it takes a lot to make me cry, be proud! (: )

    Right now I'm happy, sad and pissed (no offense), I love the story and I'm sure I'll read it again and again and again!
    October 16th, 2009 at 11:04pm
  • bloodravyn

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    noooo!!!!
    she should've ended up with zacky!
    :-(
    August 26th, 2009 at 08:53pm
  • Sin D

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    I really like the end of the story =D
    Its not cliche like other endings.

    It was....................AMAZING!!!! <33333
    June 25th, 2009 at 04:42pm
  • Indie Rock CD

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    Ace Story :D loved it :D

    ~ ~ Indie ~ ~
    June 22nd, 2009 at 01:29pm
  • lottie2427

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    Quick reply*sniffels* Aw it's the end, a really good end even if it wasn't as I expected... although that's the sign of a good ending - an ending which you couldn't figure out, so well done =]
    Clap Bye
    June 22nd, 2009 at 11:38am
  • BabyDollBlue

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    *Applauds* WOOT I loved the whole entire story
    I'm glad Rosie and Zacky are cool again
    awesome story like always!
    June 22nd, 2009 at 12:45am
  • BethanyVengeance

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    As much as I wanted them to get together....I think it was a fantastic ending :D:D
    xx
    June 21st, 2009 at 09:33pm
  • Call The Angels

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    I loved the ending dear!
    It was incredibly fitting and it made sense!
    And I'm glad they're friends. :) It made me smile.
    June 21st, 2009 at 08:33pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    aw i loved it, sweets! i thought that ending was perfect and was glad you wrote it that way! can't wait for another story as always! haha
    June 21st, 2009 at 08:15pm
  • FallBackDown

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    I loved it!!! I'm so glad her and Zacky didn't get together, I don't like Zack one bit in this story lol
    but I'm still glad she forgave him.
    Perfect ending!!!!! The whole story was amazing.
    x
    June 21st, 2009 at 08:09pm
  • gipsy danger.

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    I going to punch you in the face!
    bahaha no Im kidding!!
    I loved the ending A LOTTT!!
    it was like perfectt
    even if it didnt end up how a lot of us wanted!
    I loved this storyyyy <3 very muchh
    June 21st, 2009 at 07:35pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    It's not the ending I was looking for, I'll admit that right now. But, I am pleased that they're friends. I don't like Ben.
    More soon??
    June 21st, 2009 at 07:23pm
  • Freak Out

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    i still dont like zacky or the other twin.
    June 21st, 2009 at 06:54pm
  • LifeLovesMusic

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    -tear tear-
    This story will be greatly missed. the sadness. the happiness. all of it.
    though I must admit, I figured that Rosie would end up with Ben after reading the karaoke chapter. I don't know why then but that's just when my brain totally changed it's point of view.

    and although the story is over and all, I just hope that Zacky and Hayley are able to work everything out...so in my own little world in my head, they will!
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    yeah I'm crazy, ya got a problem with it??? lol jk hahaha

    hmmm I agree with mshadowslover, it would have been cool knowing how he felt about her when they were friends before Hayley came. He never hinted to liking her as any other way than a friend but in the beginning, we only had her point of view and how often do you realize that a guy that you like likes you unless they flat out tell you? seriously! ugh guys and their confusingness. not a word. I know. but you get what I mean. and oh well I guess. we'll just never know if they could have happened if Hayley hadn't come to America.

    oh sadness. it's all over. I'm like a broken record I think...eh. I don't care! haha
    I loved this story soooo much...which means I might be forced to go check out those other stories hmm? lol
    catch ya on the flip side!

    ♫Peace Out♫
    June 21st, 2009 at 06:13pm
  • mshadowslover

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    Aww i liked that ending!! Even though i was all for Rosie and Zacky getting together, i think i always had a feeling that she was going to end up with Ben. I wish we got to find out how zacky felt about her when they were 16/17..like if he ever had a crush on her before her sister came into the picture.
    June 21st, 2009 at 05:59pm