April 12th, 2011 at 12:35am
Electric Goat asked me to pass this on:
"As I inhale the mint flavored smoke and exhale it from my system, I drown in my thoughts."
Ah, Jenni. It is lines like these that make me so insanely jealous of you. Just the imagery here, the way I can perfectly picture it... it's astounding. There are so many lines, paragraphs, chapters just perfect like this. Honestly, if you don't end up being rich and famous for your pen, I'm going to have to have a word with whoever is in charge of the world. So, yeah, I'll be hitting up God on that one.
Yet another great chapter. I so wish I was there to check it every day like I always obsessively have. And thanks for the dedication!
Robin has such a bitter outlook on life, it seems to me, or that may just be the way I perceive it. Either way, I LOVE his personality. He has such a way of description and isn't afraid to be opinionated about things that most people wouldn't dare open their mouths about. Reno is quite the interesting character, as well, and he just happens to remind me of someone with his namesake... ;)
Anyway, the sort of quiet, normal nature of this story is another thing that makes me love it. You don't overdo things, yet you still get them down spot on. Robin's sense of indifference is something that goes through a lot of teenagers, but he's one of those that really doesn't care who hears about it. I think I'll stop rambling now. Hope you don't mind, haha. I can't wait for the next chapter!