Elizabeth - Comments

  • joonie.

    joonie. (100)

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    You have a really interesting plot here. There's so much that could happen and it's kind of exciting. There were some grammar things that could be looked into and it was formatted really weirdly. Anyway, it was enjoyable and definitely captivating.
    February 19th, 2009 at 03:51am