Virtue - Comments

You should totally make this into a story - or actually just more and more sex scenes. This RULES!

Holy crap lovie!!

That was amazing!

I love SM sex!!

More please?

The main thing that sticks out to me in the story is the fact that it's blunt and to the point. I mean, most people try to write out a story to go with the sex, and sometimes that's the hardest to write and the readers eventually could get board. But you didn't do that, it just starts like bam, and that's pretty much what slash readers like. You know what I mean? Haha, it's like, the point of this is that it's smut, so that's what I'm going to write. And yeah...I rant a lot. lol.

:XD

Another thing that really made me enjoy this as much as I did is that it doesn't actually finish. It's almost like you're a puppet master and you're setting out this scene, giving the reader's minds a little something to work with before they're left to think about it for the longest while.

That was really well done out.

I know you've probably heard this like, a million times before, but you have amazing talent when it comes to writing. Your vocabulary seems to stretch very wide and you're really great at getting emotions across. You make it so the reader feels exactly what the characters are feeling. You don't really come across that a lot.

So yeah, keep up the great work!


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that was hot!!!!. .

I don't really have any clue on whether or not this is a one-shot, but...

GAH I WANT IT. :cheese:

Wonderful story, my dear.
This is one of the first stories I've read that actually has Gerard as the masochistic one, instead of Frank being on the bottom.

I like it.

OMG I LOVE THIS!!! its sounds soooooooo bad- its awesome!