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  • Alice Verney

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    amazing story
    April 7th, 2008 at 11:30pm
  • helen

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    Awww...Such a cute ending :}
    I liked this story, but Polaroids is way better.

    EDIT: I totally forgot to mention the thing I also like a lot about your stories. Your characters are of different ethnicities.Hail That's waht makes your stories different, 'cause I haven't seen any other with such pairings.
    February 19th, 2007 at 10:07pm
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    CosinusBeta:
    That's the end? But there's only one sentence to it (the 25th chapter, I mean).
    HOLY CRAP! I totally messed up. I didn't copy and paste it right. Hold on. I'm gonna fix it.

    EDIT: I fixed it. Damn. I feel stupid...
    February 18th, 2007 at 12:11am
  • helen

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    That's the end? But there's only one sentence to it (the 25th chapter, I mean).
    February 18th, 2007 at 12:09am
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    Because it's over... :tehe:
    February 16th, 2007 at 11:34pm
  • helen

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    Why aren't you updating this story anymore?
    February 16th, 2007 at 10:57pm
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    Thank you for your honesty. 'Tis greatly appreciated. Yes And I realized that the concept wasn't all that orginal after I wrote it. But yeah... My other story is 541,768,544,876,841,468,747,468,764 times better than this one. I think that the plot is WAY more creative and my description is WAY better. And it's not as emo. :tehe: But thank you. And if you read the other one you'll notice the difference.
    January 25th, 2007 at 10:30pm
  • helen

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    Okay, so I've read your story and I liked it. Honestly, the whole idea, the concept, isn't very original, but there are many things to like about this story. You describe only the most relevant things, which makes the story more dinamic and that's good. There are many twists that make it more interesting. Maybe you should put some more effort in describing the characters' conditions (by that I mean their thoughts). Well, I think I've covered everything.
    Basically, I like your story. You got yourself a new reader :}

    I'll read the second story this weekend. At least I hope so.
    January 25th, 2007 at 10:20pm
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    Thank you guys so much for reading my story. It means a lot...
    January 21st, 2007 at 05:43pm
  • Iero_Hero

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    Hehe... I love this story.. sequel?
    January 21st, 2007 at 04:39pm
  • So.Crush.Me.Baby

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    Aww Yay ..
    A Happy Ending =D
    It Rocked Big Much =]
    [x] .. Ashleigh .. [x]
    January 21st, 2007 at 02:05pm
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    Eventually... *Nods*
    January 21st, 2007 at 06:52am
  • Sid and Nancy

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    dats the last chapter......................

    o_O

    erm sequel please?
    January 21st, 2007 at 06:49am
  • Sid and Nancy

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    *more soon

    sorry =]
    January 21st, 2007 at 06:23am
  • Sid and Nancy

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    my soon?
    January 21st, 2007 at 06:23am
  • Iero_Hero

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    I love this story.... write more pwease????????
    January 21st, 2007 at 05:57am
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    Sid and Nancy:
    i lub this storyeh
    =]
    For some reason, I've been thinking about this phrase. It's so cute and funny. I lub it!
    January 21st, 2007 at 02:11am
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    One more chapter left...
    January 20th, 2007 at 10:15pm
  • So.Crush.Me.Baby

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    Add More Pretty Please? =D
    [x] Ashleigh [x]
    January 17th, 2007 at 06:39pm
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    Thx soooooooo much guys. *Huggles*

    Kay. There are only two more chapters left. How do you guys want them? At the same time or one today and one tomorrow?
    January 15th, 2007 at 04:53pm
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