actually fro all the parts with girls in them i got a littlle help from friends that were girls so ya i don't have the 'mind of a woman' xP (loser) jk ur cool ^_^
THANK YOU For commenting every body It makes me feel really great and well motivated to write more, cuz then I believe some one is actually reading my story that from about a couple months ago only i thought was cool, so THANX AGAIN!