March 17th, 2009 at 02:10pm
Gah! This was amazing!
You are such a brilliant writer! GAH!
I loved this!
Write another Ger-Z soon, yes!?
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February 16th, 2009 at 06:33am
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I like motorcycles... :D Very good story my friend.February 15th, 2009 at 08:40am
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I like motorcycles... :D Very good story my friend.February 15th, 2009 at 08:40am
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Okaaaaay, okay. Don't hurt me.
I still don't understand how you thought you coudn't describe anything at all for a while there. You never cease to amaze me with the way you work your words. They just...flow. Always.
And, like always, this was brilliant. The mood was perfect, and like they both said up there, you always make Gerard and Lyn work so amazingly well together.
But yay for layout updates and changes! =] Iz very nice and spiffy now.
Okay? Long enough that Rex won't hurt me?February 1st, 2009 at 10:02pm -
She stole my words.- Infected.:
- I envy you on a very unhealthy level, just so you know.
It amazes me how well you can write, and how your writing style can adapt and change to fit the plot of the story you're writing at the time.
The way you wrote their characters, I must admit, was phenomenal. They worked very well with each other, as Seance said, and I enjoyed that they weren't lovey-dovey from the get-go.
Your stories make me smile, and this one was no different.
The only thing I wasn't fond of was the layout. The picture at the bottom obstructs the end of the story and I had to highlight it to finish reading it.
Other than that, the story itself was amazing, as usual.
You didn't let down with this one.
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February 1st, 2009 at 09:48pm -
I envy you on a very unhealthy level, just so you know.
It amazes me how well you can write, and how your writing style can adapt and change to fit the plot of the story you're writing at the time.
The way you wrote their characters, I must admit, was phenomenal. They worked very well with each other, as Seance said, and I enjoyed that they weren't lovey-dovey from the get-go.
Your stories make me smile, and this one was no different.
The only thing I wasn't fond of was the layout. The picture at the bottom obstructs the end of the story and I had to highlight it to finish reading it.
Other than that, the story itself was amazing, as usual.
You didn't let down with this one.
;)February 1st, 2009 at 08:17pm -
Ah, I love this story. *__*
Gerard and Lyn are so cute. You always make their characters work so well with eachother. *is a shameless Gerard/Lyn teenie*
It was really well written (as always), and the song just makes it even more awesome.January 31st, 2009 at 07:27pm
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Soooo, I read this a while ago but haven't commented yet (obviously) and I can't comment now 'cause I'm all :cheese: 'cause I have a debate tomorrow, so I definitely owe you a review.
But I will say this: I don't usually read Ger-Zs (I mean, I write them sometimes but I don't read them all that much for some reason) but this one was interesting. And it had motorbikes which was cool. I like that it was subtle in a way, and that their actions showed their feelings, rather than words.
I thought you did a great job.
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