“Sodomize my cross, for it now marks your existence. Dismissal of lucidity, consume my body and blood.” I like that quote. :cute: It sets the stage for the one shot quite nicely.
I love the names of everyone in Keagan’s family. They’re so unique. Well, Logan and Oscar aren’t OMG EXTREMELY unique, but way more unique than Ryan or Nick.
The piercing is very original. I never even thought of knuckle piercings.
“ Suddenly, the young girl questioned why she didn’t have to sign a form, or have an adult with her. She looked up at the woman in terror. “Don’t worry! I’ve done this tons of times. The equipment is sterile. Now just make a fist.” Keagan’s nod was a little less sure of herself this time. ”
I probably wouldn’t get a piercing if someone reassured me with “I’ve done this tons of time!” Sounds like something that would be used to defend a mediocre piercer. :shock:
It’s adorable how her siblings are afraid of the piercings. It reminds me of when I went trick or treating with my mom and sister like eight years ago, and my mom was a witch. My sister refused to hold the hand with the slide on rubber witch fingers.
Very cute ending :cute:
The only thing that I’d suggest is instead of having one enter between paragraphs, have two. It makes it easier to read on the internet, where double space doesn’t exist haha.
I like that quote. :cute: It sets the stage for the one shot quite nicely.
I love the names of everyone in Keagan’s family. They’re so unique. Well, Logan and Oscar aren’t OMG EXTREMELY unique, but way more unique than Ryan or Nick.
The piercing is very original. I never even thought of knuckle piercings.
“ Suddenly, the young girl questioned why she didn’t have to sign a form, or have an adult with her. She looked up at the woman in terror. “Don’t worry! I’ve done this tons of times. The equipment is sterile. Now just make a fist.” Keagan’s nod was a little less sure of herself this time. ”
I probably wouldn’t get a piercing if someone reassured me with “I’ve done this tons of time!” Sounds like something that would be used to defend a mediocre piercer. :shock:
It’s adorable how her siblings are afraid of the piercings. It reminds me of when I went trick or treating with my mom and sister like eight years ago, and my mom was a witch. My sister refused to hold the hand with the slide on rubber witch fingers.
Very cute ending :cute:
The only thing that I’d suggest is instead of having one enter between paragraphs, have two. It makes it easier to read on the internet, where double space doesn’t exist haha.